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All Deviations
All Deviations

Snap: Chapter five by ~Kyotama:iconKyotama:



He's dying to get away, let the pain of yesterday go slipping through the cracks.

You remember wanting a screaming match.

"Famous last words..." You find yourself muttering.

You're bitting your lip to the point of bleeding, and you feel the salty evidence running down your cheek.

You r wanted a screaming match, not a random fight on how you're not treating your family members correctly.

You couldn't care less.

You check it off on your list of this to do though.

Joy.

~!~

You find yourself walking about aimlessly, you hands shoved in you pockets, shoulders slumped.

You walk in balance on the railroad tracks, staring at your feet as you walk.

You wonder how you're keeping balance on such a narrow path.

A snow flake falls on your nose and you look up to take in the color of the darken skies.

Purple.

Cosmic purple.

You breathe in the cold air and sit down on an icy snow bank.

For a moment, you watch the snow as it floats down and hits your warm face, melting then rolling off your body.

You close your eyes and the snow falls to your eyelids, sliding down your cheeks and disappearing.

Hiding himself away, watching all the memories fade away from red to black.
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Follow a young girl as she walks through her life. Pressure builds, tension kills and she hears a snap when her sanity finally breaks.



Lyrics "Red to black" a la Fort Minor.

:D

Just a bit of a breather, this kid needs some time alone.

I'm almost done with this.
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~MUSICxxJUNKIE:iconMUSICxxJUNKIE: Feb 29, 2008, 4:38:57 PM
The tone if this is very quiet, subtle. the cosmic purple, the gentle snowflakes, the silent tears. It's a really soft, white scene.

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I run till the silence splits me open. `

Photography: ~xx-ttainted
~Kyotama:iconKyotama: Mar 4, 2008, 9:51:04 AM
:D glad you got it.

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How could you be so reckless? I initially meant it,
Seems like you put your effort into me, what am I left with?
Nothin' but a canvas with a black and white portrait,
Of me and you, in a burnin' garden of scorchin' orchards.
~nouseforaname01:iconnouseforaname01: Mar 5, 2008, 4:29:16 PM
wow! can't wait for chapter six. once again... your writing is great.
~Kyotama:iconKyotama: Mar 6, 2008, 3:55:10 PM
Thank you. I'll put it up soon.

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How could you be so reckless? I initially meant it,
Seems like you put your effort into me, what am I left with?
Nothin' but a canvas with a black and white portrait,
Of me and you, in a burnin' garden of scorchin' orchards.
~redtea-chan:iconredtea-chan: May 23, 2008, 7:45:53 PM
I really like this chapter. the imagery is gorgeous.....
~Kyotama:iconKyotama: May 23, 2008, 7:49:48 PM
Hi abby chan! :wave: Thank you for the comment, I'm glad you like it.

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How could you be so reckless? I initially meant it,
Seems like you put your effort into me, what am I left with?
Nothin' but a canvas with a black and white portrait,
Of me and you, in a burnin' garden of scorchin' orchards.
~Kyotama:iconKyotama: May 23, 2008, 7:56:44 PM
Thank you for the fave too :D

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How could you be so reckless? I initially meant it,
Seems like you put your effort into me, what am I left with?
Nothin' but a canvas with a black and white portrait,
Of me and you, in a burnin' garden of scorchin' orchards.