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All Deviations
All Deviations

Snap: Breaking point by ~Kyotama:iconKyotama:



"It's never good enough..." You mumble into the dark.

It's never enough is it?

Of course not.

You remember thinking you couldn't do it; any of it.

Only you to find you could do it.

Most of it.

What you missed drove you crazy, and you find that's where your delusional thoughts are coming from.

You're driving yourself crazy.

A wild line of laughter escapes your lips as you crawl out of bed.

The pressurse behind your eyes is pounding an unsteady beat, making you walk tipsily to the bathroom down the hall.

The way you've benn keeping to yourself, the sleepness nights, the constant headaches and the bitterness welled in your throat...

You see the friut of your self tormant glaring at you in the mirror.

You're horrifed.

~!~

You're pretty sure you hear a loud snap when your sanity breaks.

You're not completely sure, however.

It could have been the sound of you smashing your head into the glass mirror and shattering the reflection of yourself.

You sway back and forth and watch the broken glass fall from it's place.

You stare at the shattered image of yourself with the same deluded, glazed over look that you glare at most people with.

"I'm not crazy..." You mumble. "You drove me crazy."

And then you realize the person you truely hate is looking at you through the shattered mirror pieces.

You resolve to never see that person again.
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Follow a young girl as she walks through her life. Pressure builds, tension kills and she hears a snap when her sanity finally breaks.


All done then.

Night: :w00t: we're done. But there's an alternate ending. I'll be putting that up in a mintue.

Good, coz I'm sleepy.

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~PaltZu:iconPaltZu: Mar 26, 2008, 8:18:43 AM
Love it!! :clap:

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~Kyotama:iconKyotama: Mar 26, 2008, 11:59:48 AM
Aw, thanks. :D

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How could you be so reckless? I initially meant it,
Seems like you put your effort into me, what am I left with?
Nothin' but a canvas with a black and white portrait,
Of me and you, in a burnin' garden of scorchin' orchards.
~PaltZu:iconPaltZu: Mar 27, 2008, 9:47:49 AM
Welcome ^^

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Free Porn!!--->>[link] No, not really, you pervert xD

PaltZu, always at your service ^^
~MUSICxxJUNKIE:iconMUSICxxJUNKIE: Mar 30, 2008, 2:36:20 PM
Forget my last comment. XD But now it seems as if it ended too fast. What's going to happen to her, what will happen to thethem? How is everyone going to react when she slowly goes insane? I think this culd be just the start to a story - not an ending.

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:frail:
I run till the silence splits me open. `

Photography: ~xx-ttainted
~Kyotama:iconKyotama: Mar 31, 2008, 11:38:13 AM
So you want me to write more I take it?

Sure. If you want me to.

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How could you be so reckless? I initially meant it,
Seems like you put your effort into me, what am I left with?
Nothin' but a canvas with a black and white portrait,
Of me and you, in a burnin' garden of scorchin' orchards.
~MUSICxxJUNKIE:iconMUSICxxJUNKIE: Mar 31, 2008, 12:03:48 PM
Well, if you want to. I'm not going to force you to do anything you don't plan on doing, but it is a mere suggestion. It just doesn't feel like the end of a story to me.

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:frail:
I run till the silence splits me open. `

Photography: ~xx-ttainted
~Kyotama:iconKyotama: Apr 1, 2008, 11:31:26 AM
I was planing on writing the next part. It's called Collision course.

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How could you be so reckless? I initially meant it,
Seems like you put your effort into me, what am I left with?
Nothin' but a canvas with a black and white portrait,
Of me and you, in a burnin' garden of scorchin' orchards.
~MUSICxxJUNKIE:iconMUSICxxJUNKIE: Apr 1, 2008, 5:15:08 PM
Coolio.

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:frail:
I run till the silence splits me open. `

Photography: ~xx-ttainted
~Kyotama:iconKyotama: Apr 2, 2008, 11:42:35 AM
And now you know. I'm kinda hoping it won't come out too cheesy.

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How could you be so reckless? I initially meant it,
Seems like you put your effort into me, what am I left with?
Nothin' but a canvas with a black and white portrait,
Of me and you, in a burnin' garden of scorchin' orchards.