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All Deviations
All Deviations


You laughed when I asked you the question.

But you really never answered.

It was a simple question.

But the anwser is ice cold.

Could you pull the trigger?

Could you kill someone?

Could you do it without flinching?

Without shedding a tear?

But why?

You would do it to save yourself.

You would do it to save someone else.

You would do it to stop someone from hurting you.

I wouldn't.

I would do it because I held that gun in my hands.

I would do it because I felt the cool metal against my fingertips.

I would do it because my hand is trembling against the trigger.

I would do it because I like the crimson color.

I would do it because I hold your life in my hands.

I would do it just because.

I would do just because I don't care.

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One of my more morbid poems. Personally, one of my favorites. I really love it, and I'm happy you all do too. So thanks for the faves.

I thought of it while I was talking to a friend of mine on AIM. I was also reading a story in which, Mike killed Chester and laughed.

I realized that killing someone probably wouldn't faze me that much.

I might laugh too.

Night: That's creepy.

I know. So what do you think? I'm working on typing color me bloody, but it's long =__=

Night:You're just lazy!

So?
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~ANIMA-Bid:iconANIMA-Bid: Jun 30, 2007, 6:12:49 PM
I like it. But...I wouldnt pull the trigger to save my own life.... I couldnt take a life if it meant my own.

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~MUSICxxJUNKIE:iconMUSICxxJUNKIE: Jun 30, 2007, 6:32:21 PM
I agree. Hell, we could be morbid together. I write enough death fics as it is anyway. I wrote one called "Red" that you would probably like. :)

Nice poem.

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~spearow1333:iconspearow1333: Jun 30, 2007, 6:35:00 PM Mood: Joy
This one is morbid... :D Awsome!

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~spearow1333:iconspearow1333: Jun 30, 2007, 6:37:10 PM
I like your avi!

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How much deeper would the ocean be if there were no sponges?
~drummerladybourdon:icondrummerladybourdon: Jun 30, 2007, 6:48:34 PM
hmmm


very interesting.


i love the use of repetition at the end.


yup. mhm. *nods*



very nice :D
~Kyotama:iconKyotama: Jun 30, 2007, 6:49:13 PM
You're gonna like Color me bloody, believe me.

And i would.

This poem is me in the wosrt ways.

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How could you be so reckless? I initially meant it,
Seems like you put your effort into me, what am I left with?
Nothin' but a canvas with a black and white portrait,
Of me and you, in a burnin' garden of scorchin' orchards.
~Kyotama:iconKyotama: Jun 30, 2007, 6:50:42 PM
Morbid we are. :heart:

It's a vice of mine really. :shrug: I kinda like that about myself. Death fics...:drool: Like my story written in blood? If you haven't read it, please do, i'm sure you'll like it.

Link to Red please ;)

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How could you be so reckless? I initially meant it,
Seems like you put your effort into me, what am I left with?
Nothin' but a canvas with a black and white portrait,
Of me and you, in a burnin' garden of scorchin' orchards.
~Kyotama:iconKyotama: Jun 30, 2007, 6:50:56 PM
You seem rather happy about it :D

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How could you be so reckless? I initially meant it,
Seems like you put your effort into me, what am I left with?
Nothin' but a canvas with a black and white portrait,
Of me and you, in a burnin' garden of scorchin' orchards.
~Alternatiivi:iconAlternatiivi: Jun 30, 2007, 6:51:32 PM
I´d do it.

This is great, I like it.

(... Like OMG I´m faving a poem! :crazy:)

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~ANIMA-Bid:iconANIMA-Bid: Jun 30, 2007, 6:51:36 PM
I mean, thats the only justified reason to kill, but...I couldnt... I dont know why....

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